Title: Titanic.Author: Paul shipton.Who: Leonardo Dicaprio , Kate Winslet and passengers.
What: Titanic hit an iceberg and sank.
When: on the night of April 14-1912.
Where: in the sea.
Which level: level 3.
Summary: Titanic is an old ship in the world. It’s called white stare liner. Also the ship could carry more than 3000 passenger. Its have three classes or floor. On day the ship went to the trip in some were suddenly Titanic hit an iceberg and sank. There are many people die in night. Some people were stealing a life but they are many people died. Because the weather was very cold.
Your Response: It’s an exciting story. It’s good think to read the old story and know about old story what’s happened. Actullay I found a story about love between to kind of people rich people and poor people. Now I know in this story what
is the biggest and best ship is.
Your Response: It’s an exciting story. It’s good think to read the old story and know about old story what’s happened. Actullay I found a story about love between to kind of people rich people and poor people. Now I know in this story what
is the biggest and best ship is. 
Ahmad, it is nice that you added a picture to your post to help understand the story. It would be nice if you could add a bit more detail in your summary though as I think you skipped a lot of the story. Your response is okay, though more specific details would be helpful. :D
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