When I was a child, I were planning to get this job. Because of the features of my job, I loved it and I’m interesting to do it. UAE encourage its population to study in the universities by give them many facilities such as; high salary and transportation. I want to complete my study to get the degree , and also to get a high salary. My country gives me the salary and house, and it helps me to complete my study through this job . I love my country so much therefore, I must protect it from enemies. I would like to be an officer to protect my country. This job gave me a special support to build my future, it also gave me the respect of people. I hope all my friends to complete their study through this job to have the ability to keep our country in safe. 
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ReplyDeleteNice cartoon added to your blog!
1 Don't use ; after "such as"
2 Put : after "I love my country so much"
3 You need ; or period after "build my future"
You have good reasons for joining the military! I think your family and your country will be very proud of you.